Quiet Poetry Lounge : Another spin

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Another tale
    of motions
    crossing da
    inner soul
    mixing mind
    mental thoughts
    into new waves
    on a tale spin
    as da heart
    feels all the
    mixtures of
    some rapid
    love searching
    deep down
    left clueless
    yet feeling
    the motion
    spinning in
    a romantic
    twister
    world wind
    cascading
    moments
    of dispair
    awaiting
    answers
    to dis spin
    help! :nuts: :hammer:
     
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    moments
    of dispair
    awaiting
    answers

    i hear ya on dis.....
    but if it is true
    the answers will come
    from within....
    and begin to speak clear
    and loud....very good write
    you been in my mind i see

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    it's like a coasta ride
    when they mix wit
    emotions and reality
    and then a clueless
    thought of whom
    or what brings
    feelings to play
    that can leave
    da mind confused
    but da heart in
    love ....whewwww!

    Thankz for da read sistah Angel.
     
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    indeed...also can break the heart as well
    if left to long with out the answer it needs
    thas when the roller coaster goes down
    and trust is broken..emotions crumble
    and the clueless runs the mental

    I hear ya!!!!

    Angel
     
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    yep ya on point !
    maybe da answers are
    within da flow or sho
    up at da door maybe
    it's not clueless or a myth
    maybe it's a bite of life
    or a structure of thinking
    too deep into one maybe
    it was da heart moving faster
    then reality or a myth of
    emotions maybe the answer
    is covered and afraid to peek
    maybe it's just sleep and need
    awakening up from it's slumber
    maybe it was an act who knows ?
    but surely it's there somewhere .
     
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    then maybe its a game
    of the heart
    a mental mind play
    teasing pleasing myth
    wanting reality but scared
    then to...maybe to see how
    far one will go
    or to test ones love
    but how every it is
    ones feelings always
    in it.....
    it betta wake up and realize!!!
    bring its butt home....:)

    sho ya right!!!
     
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    thankz for the insight
    and bringing light
    maybe it will be alright
    but for now
    H~E~L~P !!!!!......lol
     
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    yes my dear....
    you need :help:
    so let me..... :spank:
    some then...:court: a little
    then we can....:flirt: for a few
    then i have to... :spank:
    one mo time.....
    it may not :help:
    but it sho bring a smile....:lol:
    :kiss::kiss::kiss::kiss:
     
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    I just might need it
    and a spanking or
    a wet blanket
    i might need a knock
    on da head or my
    space in bed
    i might need a kiss
    or some hot bliss
    i might need help
    it a secret quiet
    as kept but still
    the spin is cast
    and unknowns
    have no answer
    for myth or reality
    so i'll stick my head
    in !#@*%# well
    i bet not coz it won't
    tell me anything!
    peace sistah
     
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    well what if
    i just give u one of these..
    :grouphug:and a :kiss:

    i might need help
    but we wont tell no body :wink:
    a secret quiet..:)
     
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