Quiet Poetry Lounge : Another secret of thy woman

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From da depth of love
    body lay in stilliness of
    a creation unto thy mother
    new life resound from da
    great flood of birth like an
    harvest blooming in ju`vember
    temptation rise above degrees
    thy womb flicker open
    the aftermath spreads in a new
    exsistance she become the
    creator of life a woman vows
    of secrecy yet suductive to man
    the vision become clear
    her heart welcomes love
    her soul is pass to thy child
    her body was shared twice pass
    any image from man to child
    she offers her full support and
    thy teaching of knowledge forth
    wisdom is given like a take away
    the seed blooms bright her worth
    take a new meaning as i sit beside
    the bed only she know the truth of
    thy child our spiritrual spirits touch
    from eye to eye she sugar coated
    a smile that last forever & protection
    is felt the stall air allows breath
    inhale to exhale the love is capture
    in da mental mind by the mark a
    weeping tear fall and the soft cry
    through da night the bond is made
    anew from the womb i rise in honor
    to respect thy wo-man whom so
    shelter my will to adulthood wit
    her grace and compromise a woman
    gift is my treasure i ador.

    A Dyamond flicked Nu~Wave production
    of da womb 2005 all Rights Reserved $R
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was moving left me speechless this one of your best works i am very moved by this right here
    "smile that last forever & protection
    is felt the stall air allows breath
    inhale to exhale the love is capture
    in da mental mind by the mark a
    weeping tear fall and the soft cry
    through da night the bond is made
    anew from the womb i rise in honor"


    This touched me....you took this and sprayed the canvas with perfection and a true King of heart perfect awesome flowing Rich....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u Angel the creation of life is da wo-man thy creator through da womb
    another secret told .
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And this was wrote with much compassion and respect.....thank you for sharing your gift i love when you do what you do...:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise my dear likewise one poet to another poeticly
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The gift of a mother's love for her child is unending, beyond the adult years, beyond her passing. Quite a tender piece you've penned.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat sista Watz Thankz from da flicked womb of thy woman secret
     
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    Ahhhh, this is so beautiful, $$RICH$$. Watz said it best - tender and sweet. :hearts2:
     
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    thankz sis as the secret speakz again gempis
     
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    i admire your respectful understanding of the woman

    beautiful scribe, keep the flow goin
     
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