Black Poetry : ANOTHER PART OF ME

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blades of grass,
    taller than I,
    as I scramble
    through twisting
    vines.

    I see no light.
    I hear no voices
    other than my
    own.

    All around me,
    I sense
    no signs
    of life.

    As I near
    the edge
    of this field
    of grass,
    I see
    a vision of myself
    gazing through.

    I reach out
    and try to grasp
    some part of me,
    but all I hold
    is an empty shell
    of where my soul
    used to be.

    Still, I go on
    cause I know
    this time, I will find
    another part of me
    to make my soul complete.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    oh' yessssssssss
    how sweet this was
    the soul is in reach keep walking
     
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    this is a good piece, keep flowwwinnnnnn:toast:
     
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    beautiful flow... love it :)

    peace
     
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    Sierra, you always put me in this place where i know youre commin from.....:heart: felt flow! :)
     
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    tyte flow...it flowed just rite and the words were perfect...
     
  7. Sierra

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    Hi Rich,

    I know one day, I'll find all of who I am.

    :thanks: for writing!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  8. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi MORE,

    Thanks you so much!!

    It was nice hearing from you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi NADIA, :wave:

    I am glad you liked it!!

    Thanks for stopping by!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi SWtT,

    Thanks so much for writing!! Your kind thoughts warm my soul!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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