Black Poetry : Another Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Mar 17, 2005.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can we talk this over?
    I'm trying to understand
    you siad you don't want to hurt me
    and you're in love with another man
    how can you do this to me after all we been through
    spending time everday didn't mean anything to you
    how can you say you love me ?
    when you love the same sex i do
    you where my lover as well as my best friend
    now you decided to tell me that this game you were playing need to end
    how can you play with my heart and bouce it off a wall
    when the love i gave, my head i had to fall
    see you don't understand how i really feel
    you married me, so the love wasn't really real?
    i cry tears od sadness never felt joy
    i wa s in love with a man that was in love with another boy
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ouch... feeling your pain ~
     
  3. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *gives you a bandaid*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    my heart feels all of this
    u express deep whoaaaaaaa!
    i'm like 1poet ouchhhhhhhhhhh.
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    don't know what to say...cept...i felt this poem...
    from my head to my toes...
    theirs a scar there...may it heal quickly and without to much pain
     
  6. lucy103

    lucy103 New Member MEMBER

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    that was deep. i felt that :bullseye:
     
  7. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooh suga

    you really let your pain out in this one.
    I seriously felt the hurt
    don't let the wound turn to scars



    Loved this one, very heartfelt
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where's nothing to say or do to lessen the blow...but inner conversations will put you at much peace. Forgive, not for him...but for you, then start healing.
     
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    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY !!!!!!!
    I liked how you let the pain flow in this
     
  10. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice drop sis,
    Feeling the need to :jam:
     
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