Black Poetry : Another Man story

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jan 5, 2005.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    City streets of proverty
    tarnish pride
    freedom thunder struggle
    reside
    earthly liberty
    heavens glory
    the song of a black man
    story
    beneath battle fields
    country blood
    cloudy maze beyond
    da apathy harizon spoken
    sorrow stolen love broken
    hurt signifying death
    through constantly random
    bleeding in da city
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another addition to another chapter of struggle, in the story of another Black man who somehow continues to rise. Speak on brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sista he shall be victorious somehow someway someday
    thankz for the visit to the black man struggle
     
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    I love it when you bring this side of your poetry out, baby doll. Love this flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sista Gempis my ink is full and new
    ya words always go deep i luv ya .............
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Babyboi you remind me so much of a pheonix rising from the ashes.
    Blessings and continue to flow so beautifuly.
    Love out...

    Prophetic
     
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    your mental leads you in this scribe
    you keep on writting for i will always read
    you....loving your style sweetie

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u propheticNsyght it da Nu wave indingo song of a black man

    Thank u Angel most humble that u read me daily as i struggle for
    new high and better my hand .
     
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    The story of the black man
    may very well be one of struggle...
    but Struggle brings about the inevitable...

    Victory...
    so in truth
    The story of a black man...is also one of Victory


    Nice flow Poet!
     
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    Thoughts of man Blockage. yet he is still on the rise... who seeks to be spiritually glorified. Definitely enjoyed the viewpoint.
     
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