Black Poetry : Another Madness

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blaquebutterfli, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he lures me
    with strands of love
    sifted through his intellect
    like sands through the hourglass
    then wonders why
    I strain to follow

    he seduces me
    whispered words
    as silky as the satin on his bed
    smooth as new wine
    sweet as raw honey
    then wonders why
    I crave his kiss

    he caresses me
    gentle as a summer breeze
    before a midday storm
    ruffling my hair
    as he blows away my inhibitions
    then wonders why
    I cling to him

    he leaves me
    saying I smother him
    she lets him breathe
    when all I can think is
    he is my breath
    then wonders why
    I won't let go
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was str8 up great
    the power it pose
    and depth felt
    flow on let it be known..........
     
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    I felt this sh*** straight through. I like this poem.
    I don't read many, but this is the first that
    I have read @ this site that made me wonder dang,
    who the hell wrote this sh***!
    I guess because I heard, felt and
    could almost literally see the depth of love.
    Yeah I digged.
     
  4. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ as always you are too kind, but coming from a true master of the art, the words are appreciated

    peppachatni - thanks, I'm glad you felt it...but the 'who' who wrote it ain't nobody special, I just be trying sometimes it works, sometimes it don't. glad this one worked for you.
     
  5. triniti424

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    blaquebutterfli...i must disagree wit u because only a special poet like u coul have done this one so well :)
     
  6. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks triniti, as always you are much too kind...you make a sister feel special...that's why you are so loved
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very good....very very good...
    like $$$$ man said...very deep and true....heartfelt.....

    now do you think some guys feel like this for their women???







    trust me.....they do.......

    keep clinging on, love....keep clinging on.....
     
  8. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do believe some guys feel this way for their women...




    Now why are they so few and far between?hmmm
     
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    :jawdrop:

    LOVE the way you put this together. Just silky.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel this so much....been there
     
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