Black Poetry : Another Level

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Apr 8, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes you blew my mind
    Taken me into a comfort zone
    Placing me in your protective arms
    Stroking the passion of my soul
    Seeking what you knew was hidden
    The essence of me
    The woman

    In your tone an ancient beat
    Has so deeply awaken me
    Given me a joy I never knew
    So sweet so meek
    Bringing a smile that’s
    Soulfully deep

    Yes you blew my mind
    Placing me on cloud nine
    Laying me on the stars
    Feeling the extreme heat
    Of Heavenly love
    Instinctively
    Sweet kisses
    Stripping me completely
    Of the armor once wore
    Now gone

    Yeah you did all that
    Rescuing me back from
    A cold zone
    Into the warmth of your
    Strong your arms

    The smile on your face
    The serious glance
    From you
    The Man
    Stripped bare before you
    Holding nothing back of me
    I feel
    I feel
    Ahhhhhhhhh
    All over
    Tinkling

    You have taken
    The fear from me
    I give to you
    The trust of my heart
    Making a melody
    Smooth harmony
    Etching a sensation
    Soul to Soul
    Heart to Heart
    Connecting
    Flexing
    To another level
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: BEUATIFUL, thats talent

     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice flow sita
    likes
    peace
    Angel
     
  4. Khasm13

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    trust is a wonderful thing...
    props on dis piece sista
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bluewater u blew my mind wit dis one ....wow !!
    i'm so loving it make me wanna ummmmm!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You almost took us there with ya with those words, I liked the way you flowed with this.
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very beautiful, sister, I love it.
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's so much style in your writing!
    Poetry just flows through and from you sis.
    She got style, She got class!!!!!!!!!
    Very nice flow!!

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you :thanks: dear sister for the love:heart:
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you brother twision:thanks:you are so so kind:heart:
     
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