Black Poetry : Another letter openly

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Moon gleam
    as starz spring
    windz sing
    in the moment
    of nyght
    glisten distance
    sparkles of shine
    everytyme she
    hit my mind
    all i see
    is a love of thee
    rapidly , sweetly
    thinking about
    my tender Rose
    and the vow my
    heart pose
    but she stand afar
    sending message
    of her essence
    our of the pools
    of warmth i feel her
    near as she cast all
    her cares upon me
    i truely de vow my
    soul and forever hold
    if she only knew the
    truth and realm of me
    i could shower her in
    the untouched moments
    to treasure
    i know deep wit my eyez a
    rapture speaking without
    sound or touched
    but is heard and felt
    mesmerizing her soul
    i'm only two steps away
    to bring her this magical
    captivity of love
    and honor the days she offer
    somewhere somehow one day
    this will no longer come to pass
    but live in the orbit of my soul
    as it linger deep
    i wonder do she hear me
    and and can she feel me
    if so lady speak !
    so u know i am who i am
    and my love awaits u
    to take u in my royal kingdom
    and bath u in delightful caressin
    hot oil and berries coco milk
    and juices and light da candles
    to shine way to my heart
    speak my love so i may hear :luvv:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you been listening to
    Marrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry...huh?

    this was warm and sweet
    words from within the soul
    as it touch the heart......Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sistah yeah Mary a class act
    and heart felt made me river this piece
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That Mary strikes again, we all have our muses...lol. Well, whatever and whoever brought this about, this piece was heavenly sweet and felt in the rapture of it all. You paint a very romantic scene here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz and yes sistah she hit again and made me
    roll from the deep of emotions ....lol
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh I think she heard you...loud and clear :huh: ...by the way, is that the Mary with the little lamb? :uhoh:
    wonderful poem, I liked it a lot, thanks for sharing it.
     
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    thank u ......it a MARY
    she hold no lamb but a J...
    so i can drift & play ...lol
     
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    OoO!!! Pretty, deep, loving, and did I mention pretty? ;) You da bomb, $$RICH$$ness.
     
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    big thankz gempis most humble u got me blushing
     
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    nice flooooow rich:)
     
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