Black Poetry : Another guy....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlatinaPoet4u, Oct 6, 2004.

  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You come pleading on your knees
    Sorry, my support is gone
    No more fun and games for us
    ‘Cause of what you’ve done to us
    I swear we were so perfect
    All the puzzle pieces fit
    My fingers lace great in yours
    ‘Till you declared it over
    Fine ‘till you went off to camp
    And then you spotted your tramp
    And made out with her, oh no
    Didn’t bother going slow
    And you told me these big lies
    But I could see it in your eyes
    You say we’re better as friends
    And my tears start as we end
    Later on I heard the truth
    Heard the nasty things you do
    And how you cheated on me
    So now you’re pleading for mercy
    But I cannot hear you yell
    ‘Cause my life was going well
    Until you left me for her
    And now she says it’s over
    And you expect me to care
    Boy, are you that unaware
    How every night I’m crying
    ‘Cause of you I am dying
    I know I was your best friend
    And it hurts to see the end
    But I need to let go now
    I need to forget you now
    And you are only a guy
    … Only a great guy I loved. :hearts2:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BETRAYAL false love and pain
    now the ear is deaf to the cry
    of mercy from da lies i feel u deeply
    on this well posed flow of expression
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERY WELL WRIT< nice scribe
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Love feels so good
    but hurt so bad...
    The bittersweet that's what it is...

    keep it flowing poet!
    Sage
     
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