Black Poetry : another free(the)dumb poem...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Aug 15, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry... yall but i been on this freedom thing lately... and the saga continues....

    freedom part III

    freedom
    wat is it
    r we free yet
    has much changed...
    since We were brought over in chains
    cuz even tho the metal has disappeared
    til
    we break
    His
    laws
    r We free yet...
    NOW?
    jus cuz our restraints are not seen in eyez view
    does it mean We r free....
    wats realy the truth....
    r We still captive
    on a land We cant escape... or dont kno if We want to...
    or how....
    r We free...
    if We must coincide wit the enemy
    agree wit the enemy
    jepordize Us for the enemy
    compromise Our life
    Our mind
    Our thots
    actions
    all for Him
    the enemy
    am I free....
    r We free...
    or does the enemy control Me
    control Us
    U?
    r We free?
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing wrong with delving into the subject further. Yes, mental chains are even worse. I like that you are going deeper into this. The message is clear.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    speak on sistah.....free ya mind and soul
    tyte flow and the saga continues indeed
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it continue aint nothing wrong with it
    tight flow..keep it coming
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FAMILY FOR ALL THE LOVE

    thanks yall.. and yes the saga continues.... part IV is to come......
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome

    just bring flow sis!!!!
     
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