Black Poetry : ANOTHER FANTASY

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beyond dreams
    of fantasy bliss
    my love truely
    exist under
    the starz of love
    yet fantasize
    in rapture of desires
    of moments shared

    you find me in
    da depth of your
    slumber
    in da middle of
    your work load
    i am the mesmerizin
    fantasy hearts lone
    and tongues moan

    through vision
    i see yo eyes
    glistering a sparkle
    and the dimple radiant
    smile u pose
    i see da essence
    of your beings
    and the treasure
    of ya humble soul

    another fantasy tingles
    as i become ya mental
    feel of love i caresses
    and embrace your thoughts
    under da cherry moon
    wit deep pleasure
    da spirit can measure
    upon my heart i visit
    in the stillness of night
    take ya moment in flyte

    under candle light
    feed u compassion
    as we drink affection
    set air mass of direction
    through fantasy session
    i am that i am
    and the love u sought
    the warmth of ya body
    and da chill that thrillz
    inside ya glist of motion

    just close ya eyez
    upon dis hypnotic
    moment and let ya
    vision cast away
    inside my chamber
    where we linger our
    love of realism for my
    heart and mind exist
    beyond da fantasy ride
    beloveth come share my world !
    :hearts1: :spinn: :flirt: :spinn: :hearts1:


    A Dyamondluv fantasy
    Nu~wave~Ink creation
    copyrights© 2005 Da $R
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Taking the vision
    of this fantasy dream
    entering in your chambers
    or so it may seem
    for as my spirit rises
    and my mind conceptualizes
    we drift beyond
    another fantasy

    Your romantic pen is on fire I see...
     
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    Wow!!! Rich.... that was very nice and snoothing
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz for the sweet flow to dis i like it....

    thankz sonnee01 for the warmth to dis here ....
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another soothing creation. I enjoy you and watzinaname back and forth responses, so poetic!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u wisdom7 soon we have to flow and drop a collab one day
     
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    this was something to wake up and read...got me all mushy inside
    i love the vibe this sent through my veins :kiss2:
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    all that soft vulnerable loving person that you are...comes shining thru..
     
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    ahhhh! Angel thank you as u fall asleep just
    go into another sweet fantasy and maybe at wake up
    it would be a reality , i'll be standing there .......


    deepy thank you so much i try to let all i have shine so they know i am .
     
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    re: Fantasy

    How romantical. I like this poem.
     
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