Black Poetry : Another Day...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Yemoja'sGoddess, Jul 1, 2007.

  1. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    Removed by choice, thank u for your interest and comments
     
  2. truetothecause

    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb006: Nice Job!

    Telling the tale
    of Love gone stale
    Heart locked like in a jail
    Waiting to Exhale...

    You know I'm feeling this one here!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A story that all too many can relate to, penned in that vivid, emotive style that never fails to reach. Penetrating write.
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um YG

    i got my bags packed and my ticket paid for

    lol

    um you know i know what you are sayin'

    and i'm feeling this work hea for real

    that's why my bags are packed and my ticket is paid for

    lololololol

    ok kids can we say OHIO

    hahahhahaha
     
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    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved QG YG:

    :SuN030:

    HILY/A:ilu: :
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I'm feeling it.

    The energy it takes sometime to wake up from ya slumber. aww, yes living life is ya duty. And the duty must go on.

    Lovely flow

    DS
     
  7. queentswana

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    Another Day...
    In order to come to "That" day...all of the "Another day"s are needed and in place.
    Every "Another Day" counts, each day carries out the old...and bring in the new.
    Heaven will soon surface.
    Great piece poet, I've certainly been there.
     
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