Black Poetry : Another Check-Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jan 4, 2010.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eve :

    what are you doing in the back of my car??!!

    howard :

    Eve

    i'm your mechanic

    you know that

    you've been coming to Free Service Tires

    for years

    to receive our free services

    eve :

    i'm sorry Howard

    it’s been a long night

    howard :

    your job?

    eve :

    yes

    some of the guys there go to far

    howard :

    there that should do it

    two PS3 consoles

    eve :

    you doing anything tonight?

    howard :

    what do you have in mind?

    eve :

    i was thinking The Orange Martini …

    [later]

    come on

    i’ll get us a seat in the back of the bar




    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin this one !!! like a mini story
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this one its almost like i am veiwng a movie
     
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