Quiet Poetry Lounge : another angry black woman

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jan 13, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you say u love me
    you say u really care
    why you lying
    when never really there
    i was supposed to be apart of you life
    you had me thinkin
    i was gonna be ur wife
    niggga F U
    and all your lies
    u stay usin excuses
    so let me ask...
    what kinda man r u?
    to leave me...
    have me...
    feeling so abused
    - you threw our love inside the trash can
    all cuz you couldnt be a man
    so just remember
    a man digs their own holes
    once i'm gone-
    i'm gone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the foolish things a man can do
    and holla the words i love u
    vent scream but let not da N ....ring
    sing da song of a mad black woman
    and hold ya head up high
    move on to true love and seek his grace
    from above
    hold no hate but set his A** str8
    i feel ya mental emotions of betrayal
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love u rich.lol
    its so funny... me and me friends started writng and ended up wit this- i added the title- figured it was appropriate-lol
    loved ur reponse. thanks much
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sista
    it's playmates like this
    that give real men like me
    a hard time after the wall
    of thy women go up
    Peace be still my beloveth ...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vent, let it out sis. I know it hurts now, but you will go on. And thank goodness, not all men are users. I hear ya, let it flow.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz- just had to drop this for all them bad days
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this release, sister - enjoyed it much.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u need to bring a pt.2 to this here !
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the whole piece was amazin' but the last 2 lines were outstanding. i like this one, the vibe was real anger, and had me thinking, man that's how it is, because like you said, once you're gone.........you're gone......one love
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your title drew me to your poem. because I got a little of the :flame: angry black woman syndrome myself. I definitely feel you on this piece thanks
     
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