Black Poetry : Anonymous

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Oct 21, 2001.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    beauty in words
    captured in human
    frame your body
    soul and mind still
    remain the same
    inside my heart
    with visions overflowing
    after dark

    a sudden spark
    from a distant ark
    coming all in vain
    slain by the touch of
    your hands ever gracefully

    you and i
    exclusively

    when we used to be
    lovers but never friends
    to begin

    you see me and still
    pretend what could have
    been was not a sin

    living and learning the
    error in your ways never
    seems to end

    think again






    :rolleyes: apt copyrighted
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well written, ma sista. i feel tha message in this piece, gurl. hmmm...yeah, i'm lovin' it! keep on scribin', dear poetess.
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes PD, the creepers do be lying to self!

    The heart that cheats, the feet that creep, the questioning voice asking him where did he sleep. Just making
    friends is never the end...with some men!!!!!!!!!!!Well written
    with excellent syncopation......One Love!
     
  4. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Yesterday, Tomorrow, and Today

    yesterday had gone away
    but tomorrow came suddenly

    must have been heaven sent
    with you here next to me

    right where you need to be
    close to my heart

    sharing a common destiny
    forming works of art
    from finish to start in hopes
    that love would grow

    wanting the world to know
    in feel of the after-glow that

    today came suddenly






    :love: apt copyrighted
     
  5. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are 2 smooth for me man. laidback with the sexiness...

    anyway,
    who in the heezy is Anonymous and iz he crazy?!?!

    the dunn.
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in the dark

    when we are alone, memories have a way of finding us...

    and forcing us to reflect on what could have been..

    nicely done pd...

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully said

    well written masterpiece lovin this ....flow head on !:kiss:
     
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