Black Poetry : Animated Clouds

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Oct 7, 2001.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CoCo....


    G.A. Jr....

    ...my what a love-ly imagination you've got!

    i loved the pure flow of this.... almost felt like
    a child again. lyin' in the grass with my gurls
    watching the clouds float by... :)

    AlwaysLove.
    G.A. Sr
     
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    That's lovely...
    Keep it coming:eek:
     
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    I agree with GA...this brings back memories of childhood lying on the grass trying to make shapes out of floating clouds...I still do it now, so I guess the child is still in me...nice peaceful image here..

    K
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA Sr,

    I remember doing the same. As a matter of fact....I was watching the clouds gracefully moving from my window and well, you know...my imagination got away from me.:D Thanks

    Madd sistahly love:heart:
    G.A. Jr.
     
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    like you...

    i get lost in the OCEAN BLUE SKIES as i conjure imaginings of YOU AND ME and how it could be when PASSION'S FIRE takes hold of me...and moistened bodies cause my heart to quiver...in anticipation of LOVE you're about to deliver UNTO ME.

    BEAUTIFUL...as always.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i like

    this
    man this was so soft sweet and smooth

    and it felt good reading it
    on the format was on point too

    DSSNY
     
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    Dig Dem'

    Animated verbals!!! I like the way you think... love the way you scribe!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sexe~ Thanks for the love:)

    Kitana~ Ain't nothing wrong with keeping a lil'bit of kid in us.:)

    Baller~ Beautiful reply as always, much appreciated.;)

    So'ja~ Me or the poem?:D Thanks for the read. DLSS

    Reas~ I love the way you sneak up on me and drop your kind words. Thanks:)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    ohhhh Ms. CBSkin!!!!

    don't know how I missed this beautiful portrait....

    so serene, so wonder- filled....taking me sooo very gently into my Monday afternoon....

    ummmm, scrumptious scenes floating inside my head....

    thank you my sistah! :) :)

    a
     
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