Khasm13 : animal ********

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    waging a reckless war against wily walruses
    as they defame our name
    after so many years of us being the hunted
    how could you still call us this?
    as salivating snakes slide inside my soul
    while my grown mans’ growth is stunted
    blunted...by baboon bystanders
    as i am attacked by perilous pouncing pandas
    cause they be like
    [email protected] us
    what????





    while i be like
    mutha f'n
    [email protected] you
    you terrorist trampling tiger that trounces tools in tenfold
    your as$ belongs in a zoo
    caged from a sky of blue and crimson dusk
    but instead i am manhandled by a pack of raving musk...rats
    that race to summon a battalion of babbling bats
    from nimrods notorious notoriety
    comes a crew a Canaanite cats
    crawling, clawing then cupping my copious
    lifes blood liquid in lurid bliss
    i clinch my fist and fight the ferocious fowl
    as my consciousness is consumed inside a cowering cow
    chipmunks and chimpanzee charge me at my knees
    while my bowels break and are besieged by disease
    wolverines rant and rave and seize me through open chimneys
    grounded gargantuan gorillas grunt...then gore at my kidneys
    with monkey made mandibles
    even the bouncing bunnies have brandished the brand of cannibals
    i strike out at sows
    but they shake and shiver to become intangible
    now tell me...how can I fight these animals
    that have...ruled over my existence for so long
    keeping my spirit shackled and shelled
    like king kong?
    i dunno
    but i do know
    that i'm forced to live on...
    hoping that my future seeds can eventually
    break the hold of the silver silhouette of the swan…
    cause this aint swan lake...
    and i aint...no mutha f'n ugly duckling....




    get it?
     
  2. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting flow.....cool.
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm,

    Welcome. This is an extremely nice scribe. I feel you on this piece. This place we live in, this place called Amerikkka is a zoo run by moral lepers masquarading as lions.

    10

    peace
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    blakverb,
    you picked up on where i was going with this one

    lions lying about latent loops
    from which they wish to hang our youth...

    peace blak
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    reality spoken here well felt
    indeed we mask in myth of
    what is and like verb said
    a zoo
     
  6. Moses the Poet

    Moses the Poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you.
    I'm wading through this jungle, tranquilizer gun in hand, resisting becoming one of the animals....

    Tight, significant scribin'

    Andrew
     
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    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo.....

    i felt the grittiness and the fierceness in the tempo of this flow....

    i am LOVING IT!!! YES......

    loving it indeed!!!

    flow on suga!!!!

    **searching for the zoo keeper**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i should be thanking ya'll
    for the inspiration
    and the motivation
    for this creation...

    this is truely a lovely fam i gots

    peace
    khasm
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow... now this is hellacreative..

    tyte.
     
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    man... This poem pounds the ground with sound alliterations
    while at the same time filling minds with much food for thought.
    do the thang poet!
     
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