Black Poetry : Angry Pregnant Woman

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  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    do i have to do everything?
    these are your children too!
    would it kill you to help me get them ready?
    can you put the dishes away?
    you know, when you wash dishes, you really
    should wipe the counters, stove, and sweep the floor...
    the toilet is filthy.
    all it takes is some Lysol and the brush
    and just wipe the thing on down with the Lysol
    ****!
    oh, so, you can't give them a bath because
    you don't want to clean out the bathtub?
    what the HELL is that?
    I'M TIRED!
    will you please help me?
    can you help me?
    can i get some help?
    would you please help me?
    i am 7 months pregnant with a 2 yr old and a 4 yr old
    and a 27 yr old!!!
    do i have to do everything???!!!
     
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    ooooh Misses K-ness.... I'm feeling the weight of your belly in this last trimester, sis! I'm feeling the ache in the small of your back, and the pressure on your bladder...I know the heaviness of your breasts and the swelling of your feet, yet you're still beautiful, radiant, full of "life".... and more than worthy.

    Just sit yourself down in that easy chair, put up your feet, do no cooking, no cleaning, no screaming, no "doggy style" , no nothing. Print this poem and silently give it to the mister in a scented envelop.....with that perfect smile of yours....

    I'm sorry he's not getting the picture...and sometimes we have to take other measures to get the message through.

    Feels good to vent, though, doesn't it? :)

    thank you for sharing

    a
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, bridge, i'm so glad you understand!
    and it feels so good to vent, i'm not even as angry
    as i was before i wrote it an hour ago.
    thank you so much for knowing
    me!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flower7

    I hear yo cries
    know yo pain
    feel da hurt
    if only he would !

    do rest ya self my sweet
    take a load off and worry not
    for tomorrow is near
    listen to some low tunes
    and push it all aside but do take it to da LORD in prayer.:)
     
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    oh, RICH, thank you for hearing me.
    and i will take it to the LORD.
    that's one thing i failed to do today...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    ahhhh!! my prayer is answer........
     
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    u took me back with this one

    I remember those days girlfriend, just like it was yesterday. and it doesnt get any better, but pray that God will condition u to deal with the situation. I'm with Alyce, sista, put your feet up, rub em yourself if you have to, soak in lots of warm baths and be good to YOU. He'll get the point soon enough. Its a good thing you have the written word to help you get out your frustrations. Stress is not good for that baby of yours - I know because i stressed my child into premature labor. Take care of yourself sista, I'll add you to my prayer list. Thank u for sharing this!!!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your support, danilyn. writing does help a whole lot! i needs all the praya i kin git, girlfriend!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Just Take Your Time

    7-,
    I truly understad your feelings and I want to say keep your head up sister. Take your time. Don't let his nonsense bring you down. GOD gave you a gift of recreating and your are defiently a queen and every queen needs assistance from her King. Maybe he will get the picture. HELP! Support! Share responsability!!!!
     
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    Stay Up Sister!!!
     
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