Black Poetry : Angry Portraits

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 2, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last night i walked into the room
    blu black clouds floating about the ceiling
    bed sheets love-crumpled...

    i sighed...sight was taken from
    my soul so i couldn't see...
    i could hear the footsteps
    u came crashing into the room....
    the door flew off their their hinges...

    dreams and tears....
    i would close my eyes
    and bring a knife to my skin...
    maybe i would bleed the pain out....

    some days i would wonder...
    and slumber on things that are
    impossible...

    u were married to that bottle...
    u loved it, and held it...
    even slept with it...

    you brought your hand down...
    i saw colors bloom before my eyes
    saturated with hate...

    i lay there relinqished from life...

    copywrite 2004, all rights reserved
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *smile*

    story
    felt the sadnees in this...
    and I love how you present your floE's...
    you have your own trademark that can not be copied.
    Great peice story
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks nita....just doin my thang...
    :heart: :heart: (double love for ma gurl)
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here sistah was well felt deep inside
     
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    very nice drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you brought this sadness into a clear vision. Love your flows.
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love..
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    -story
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wonderful..

    feel your work
    thanks for sharing..
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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