Black Poetry : Angry Masculinity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, May 16, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ANGRY MASCULINITY
    *#%!+****&@=/**=##**~

    If Hell hath no fury
    Like a woman scorned
    Then Armageddon happens
    When a man's been wronged

    Let's get it on...
    I'm fired up!
    This spot is hot,
    I got the drop ~
    I'm goin' off
    Cause I'm the boss
    Can't sleep at night
    Turned out to toss

    There ain't nothing worse
    Then a edited verse
    Disallowing angry men
    Their right to curse

    Except of course,
    ******* breaking up families
    Giving it all up...
    Over soiled panties

    You've lost your children
    But kept the faith
    Deadbeat dad...
    If your angst don't pay


    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    woah poet! let all out. your wrath has been dropped. I feel ya!
    I hear ya! your flow is tyte
     
  3. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see what u sayin,
    i know what u mean.
    but the cursing,
    is very obscene.
    i loved yo flow,
    your anger is heard all around.
    i'm not saying it ain't tyte,
    but keep the profanity down.............(good flow)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside ya vibe
    i felt ya scribe
    the wordz flowed
    deep inside
    lay it out cross da table
    this one has it's lable
    tyte speak on !
     
  5. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa! very rare!
    very heavy! flow on, Poet!
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel the emotion!!!! I like profanity though...it makes it real (er) ...but that's me!!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I HEAR YOU lilcherry76

    Your advice is well taken. I will make every attempt to be less vulgar in the future. Thanks for your honesty.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AIN'T MAD

    Everybody else should know that this poem was written in a fit of rage. It has its merits, and I stand by it 100%. Word for word, it represents the emotions of that particular time and place.
    Thank you, all.

    1poetsought ~
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If profanity helps u get it all out, then !@#$#@%#^%^....do the **** thing...Great flow poet Im feelin you
     
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