Quiet Poetry Lounge : Angry and Dying

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angry and Dying

    I feel a little selfish
    Don't want to wait and see
    I'm angry for the moment
    And dying to be free

    Told someone a secret, once
    They promised not to tell
    Said I was weak and weary
    All because I failed

    Left a trail of broken dreams
    And filled the holes with lies
    My eyes keep running water
    My heart keep asking why

    But I don't have an answer
    I hope one day you'll see
    I'm angry for the moment
    And dying to be free
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Dry your eyes my child
    brush your shoulders off
    as you go
    thougth some may
    claim to see your
    worth
    your treasures they'll
    never know
    Stay strong!
    Heartfelt scribe!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deeply felt scribe
    ya worth is more
    then any will know
    ur such a treasure
    from da heart weep not
    and let all the anger free
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many of us will feel this piece, and know of this sad place to be. But you will move on. Emotive write.
     
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    I can feel the pain in this piece
    Tired of the rain want some peace
     
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    This is an incredible flow, albeit painful. Hang in there and much love to you.
     
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