Black Poetry : Anger

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 1, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anger gets inside me n its hard to resist it
    its hardto control it when ish gets twisted
    so i just let my pen n paper take heed n fix it
    too many complications, when im tryna b simplistic

    i know im livin in the limelight, but im not fu**in invincible
    sometimes i just wanna b sumthin invisible
    i know ur just interested, but its the principle
    ive gotten use to the problems but the ppl r typical
    im only human, i cant b perfect, ive just been blessed
    its like yall watch every thing i do n wait to find sum mess
    im young, i gotta fall in order to learn, i gotta fail tests
    i reach 4 perfection, i neva settle for less
    but yall act like i cant mess up, like i cant slip
    i know my boundaries, ive gotta good grip
    i might test the waters, let alittle bit drip
    but im strong, **** let my handle my own sh**
    girl, u keep walkin in n out of my life with the same excuses
    u love me, u just keep runnin cuz ur not use to this
    yeah keep on takin me for granted, u gonna abuse this
    then ima walk, run, hide, n refuse this
    i know u got ur sh** on the side
    u aint gotta try n hide
    it from me, its coo, ill still provide
    love til i decide
    to let go n ride
    w/ anotha, get down n slide
    i mean lets make a list of this
    u've lied to me, cheated on me, tricked me into thinkin sh**
    was coo, when u were really distributin it
    but we've gone thru a lot so im tryna work thru this
    but u makin it so **** hard to worship this
    maybe im the f***in fool or maybe ur just blind
    life, life, life, to hard to manage, to hard to find
    happiness, when u gotta s-t-r-a-t-t-l-e so many lines
    and b aware of so many thoughts on our minds
    daddy, im older now, let me b the young woman i am
    i understand u want the best 4 me, but ****
    i know u think i cant do it, but i can
    i just need ur faith in me and
    ur support from the rest of the fam
    u've showed me alot
    i know i owe u a lot
    but let me spread my wongs n grow a lot
    today is now, but tomorrow's not
    so i cant promise u ill follow tha plot
    but i will make u proud n sorrow not
    lemme handle it, no need to borrow alot
    god, i know ur creator of all ur the only consistent one
    but it seems like u ignore me n resent my love
    it seems like u blame me 4 my past life, when i was down w/ that different fun
    maybe im just frontin, cuz u have also been that diligent one
    cuz most of my friends, r itchy n get bent some
    they expect me to b the one to make their life happen
    i dont mind takin em with me as long as they dont cause distractions
    im tryna make life better 4 everyone, hook em up with money, houses, n fashion
    but they want so much, when they dont handle their own business
    bein a tag along n a supporter - there's a big difference
    i need ur adivce, not ur commands, more of an inference
    so u can relate to my struggle, so u can know the experience
    but u just with me cuz ppl know my name
    cuz they know my dreams r paved w/ gold n fame
    yo i only know how to play this game
    i only know how to stay true to u n not bring u to shame
    if u b patient, i garuntee that ull ride wit me
    holdin my hand thru it all, side by side wit me
    takin blow after blow, fightin the fight wit me
    not doubtin me, stabbin me in the backside see
    ive had a lot of that ****, it gets kinda rundown
    im young, so im just tryna have my fun now
    but yall act like we in a gun down
    shootin at me, but u know im not gonna shun down
    its not my steelo, ill fight back
    u shoot, ima shoot right back

    anger gets inside me n its hard to resist it
    its hardto control it when ish gets twisted
    so i just let my pen n paper take heed n fix it
    too many complications, when im tryna b simplistic

    then once i write it, WOOSH!!!
    it disappears n POOF!!!
    it feels better, its gone
    then a new comes n more angers drawn
    (smile)wait til tomorow....
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin' your flow!
    peace to ya!
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woooowwwwwwwwwwwwww
    That boys on firah!!!
    I love your flow
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u know its funny, cuz most yall think im a boy, but im a girl lol. but thanx yall.
     
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    yeah i peeped the passion in your feminine spirit sis and i adore your flow cuz it feels so real to me....lets get it started
     
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    don't let ish get twisted
    cause your peace of mind will get blistered
    like chapped lips
    that need chapstick
    people will always try to pill some bull ish quick
    so just keep taking out your bic
    cause all the ish
    will be easier to dispense...

    i feel your vibe on this one...nnniiiicccceee
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt it all ova .......i hear ya
     
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