Black Poetry : anger versus happiness

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the red corner weighing in at 166 with a height of 6 foot 6
    with white gloves, red trunks, and blue kicks
    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT's Anger... "D***!, F***, S***"
    and now, in the green corner weighing in at 169 with a height of 5'9
    with red gloves, white trunks, and some black chucks signed
    Chuck Taylor... IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT's Happiness Peaceful, Loving, and Kind


    referee says, "Let's make this a clean fight! No hitting below the belt. No biting, No elbows."
    Any way, you recieved your instructions in the locker room.
    "Let's Go!"

    ding, ding, ding... the bell rings...

    Anger comes out craaaaazy swinging, cursing, spitting, and taunting Happiness
    Happiness blocks every punch like he's fighting a child.

    Meanwhile, the crowd goes wild admiring Anger's style.

    Happiness has grace and dances around the ring.
    bouncing off the ropes and it almost seems...

    like he's not even tryi... Whoa! a right by Happiness
    a right, left, right.

    Somebody's goin' down tonight.

    Anger is getting tired but, he still puts up a fight.

    Happiness breathes the breath of life through his mouth and exhales

    ding, ding, ding... there goes the bell.

    The trainer in the corner yells... "Give 'em Hell! Give 'em Hell!"

    Happiness' trainer says, "Relax, All is Well."

    Happiness overhears Anger's trainer's speech

    and decides to chill and let himself defeat...

    Anger swings and swings and swings until he is out of breath

    He swings so hard that he brings his own death

    for a moment that is... Anger comes right back

    on the attack but, happiness still shows slack

    sounds like the crack of a whip when Happiness strikes back

    glad to have the opportunity to to make Anger mad

    What's funny is this scenario. Call it good or bad

    but, Happy is the son and Upset is the dad.

    Like teacher versus student or master against pupil.

    The eld versus the youthful or Falsehood against truthful.

    Noone wins it is a draw. So, they still bump gloves.

    Happiness says, "One." and Anger says, "Love."

    I mean that!
    :shutup:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we're feeling pure joy, when don't even have to try hard for it to exist, it just, is. But anger wears itself out with all the angst. And the way you ended this piece, brought such a genuine smile to my face. This was wonderful. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    key points made here .......keep bringing it tis way
     
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