Black Poetry : Angels

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we may never know why
    Why the givers die
    and the takers vie
    constantly competing
    to see who can profit most
    from conniving and cheating
    Sometimes, we never know why...

    Sometimes we never know why for sure
    all the loss, and pain, we have to endure
    while searching for answers, hoping for a cure
    We often unearth a hidden treasure
    whose worth is more valuable than gold
    and quite difficult to measure
    So precious, it's immeasurable in fact
    it's the gift of knowing that God has our back
    and sends people who empathize with our plight
    who can offer wisdom and the strength we lack
    when life has us down for the final count
    and won't seem to cut us some slack
    Take a breath dear heart, believe me, it's true
    look around and you'll see
    you have angels watching over you...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true so real and i know !
    yes watz thankz for this .....
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes our angels are watching over us. nice inspirational write watz.
     
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    watz:
    This was truely beautiful.
    Always nice to know someone
    watching out for you.

    Much Luv
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're quite welcome Rich, and thank you for responding so.
    We all need some inspiration sometimes, thank you nevar.
    Yes it gives us a feeling of security, thank you much 4Everluv.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea i'm feeling this insight

    and there's an old saying
    good people get killed everyday
    and the bad ones go on living

    go figure

    good piece poet
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh Watz that brought tears to my eyes. it's so true, i think of a situation i was going through just recently and how God sent an angel to me to make things better. i think sometimes we just don't open eyes and see the true beauty of God's grace. Beautiful piece!!!!!!!
     
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    Lovely script Sista Watz:spinstar:
    :)
    :picture:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, it sure is difficult to figure that one Da Street So'ja, some things just never make sense. Thank you poet.
    I'm happy that an angel appeared your way phenomenal, sometimes we only need take a closer look to see. Thank you sis.
    Sista Spicy, thank you for commenting so, appreciated.
     
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    WATZ you have power behind your words nice scribe sistah flo on

    much much love sweettee29
     
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