Black Poetry : Angel's Song

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'Angel's Song'


    I am as content as a lone feather hitching a ride
    On the gentle summer breeze
    That is created when angels fan themselves

    There is an angel seated near
    And her breeze permeates me
    With an air scented of cosmic bliss
    Ethereal atmosphere rising from her
    Slender neck where she applies her mist
    And it is that slender column that I so badly
    Want to kiss.

    In my lap there is a gentle but noticeable
    Throb
    A meaningful lil’ motion
    An awakening
    I abide it
    Roll of my hips
    Twist to the right
    To try to hide it
    Teenage memories are
    Reintroduced to me
    Wrapped in candy paper
    I am hoping Angel in Brown
    Will become my favorite flavor
    So I twist back to the left some

    On the seatback in front of me
    I see musical notes pitched together
    Riding my Angel’s breeze
    Beneath them I see me clearly
    Embraced by Angel’s knees
    Her neck arches
    Her chest heaves
    Fingers holding against the winds
    The musical notes ascend and Angel’s song
    Begins


    ~caramelpython~
    2004
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: oh Python you little:grin:
    this was hot....as an
    :spinstar: Angel :spinstar:
    you know i so likes this write...
    :teach: you got that cap on :heart:
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    Angel's song..hmmmmmmm:lol:

    :smokin: nice drop....

    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well you know me..... :devil:

    "I Do What I Can Do When I Can Do It"

    Thanks alot MBA ...your worda are 2 kind. :shades:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: keep doing what ya doing :jumping:

    you be just fine...i likes this drop :luvv:

    Angel'song....... :shades:
     
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    Feeling the music being the love!
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoooooooooo!!!!!

    Wheeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Python , Python :jawdrop:




    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    This was HOT! :flame:

    In my lap there is a gentle but noticeable
    Throb
    whoa!
    You did ya thang
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: 1poetsought... What would we do without our angels?


    :thanks: Nita Ya know I try but we are hard on ourselves alot. ;) Now do ya thing also!
     
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    :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke: :puke:figured yoou mighta needed a little cooling off you :devil: you...you just too hot for them there pants you got/had on :D
    very nice drop...I liked that piece a lot...keep droping.
     
  9. angelicsage

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    Brother...

    I have no idea...what I'm gone do with you....

    or rather, what I'm gonna do with myself...lol

    I question, whether reading you is good for my health... :blush:

    as Nelly would say...it's gettin hot in here... :jawdrop:

    a naughty angel huh...lol...
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage..... You can read me just don't move 2 much...LOL :lips:

    Queen.... Yes well my away status should cool things 4 awhile. :help:

    MBA....... I shall reture with more 2 burn!
     
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