Black Poetry : ANGEL's DREAM II (sweet hush)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My mind race back in time
    to your soft cry in da night
    a hushed silence fell within
    da room as i turn on the light

    A smile exposed your inner self
    tiny whispers linger the air
    sound of love a desire calls
    bouncing off the bedroom walls

    Down came the heavens above
    to kiss ya heart a new found love
    not to lust but enjoy in the ummm!
    sweet lasting tender hush

    i stood looking high, knowing!
    this Angel soft cry , feeling it deep
    i start to weep for my love yes is
    a soul to keep as i sweep past the
    mental faze to a fantasy maze

    ready to share all of me !
    my soul , heart care free
    physically , mentally , spiriturally
    ever in this compassionaly blaze
    of rays and the dancing of the comit
    singing of clouds clashing and the
    glisten gleam of starz under cosmos

    this Angel dream of love
    pours from the hour glass
    of love one lones so dear
    just to hear once thy loveth
    coz everyone has a chance
    see Angel's need loving too
    from dreams to reality through
    da balls of thy eyez one sleep
    in the mist of love the heart is
    awaken for this journey and
    keep sake as one watch ova thee

    I am ever so close , i watch & hear
    and knoweth of one's soulful cry
    see Angel's need loving too so i giveth me !

    Taketh my beloveth Angel and weep not

    :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :Zzz: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1: :angel1:

    A Dyamond Dreameth
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    : :jawdrop: very nice drop RICH
    Always a pleasure to read your work
     
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    this was amazing i love it!!!! the passion was felt Angel's do need love too

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Nice piece
    thanx for sharing..
     
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    re:Angel's

    Rich, this is a very beautiful poem.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz a lot for the love given THEONE............

    thankz yes indeed angel's really do my dear Angel cakes

    thankz a million Godssoulja for the hit and love on dis

    thankz Poetrymama for the warmth you give
     
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    this Angel dream of love
    pours from the hour glass
    of love one lones so dear
    just to hear once thy loveth
    coz everyone has a chance
    see Angel's need loving too
    from dreams to reality through
    da balls of thy eyez one sleep
    in the mist of love the heart is
    awaken for this journey and
    keep sake as one watch ova thee


    yesssssssssssss.........higher knowledge.......so deep.....
     
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    thankz a million LURK man str8 up
    the love runs deep in a heart whom watch so dear
    thankz again
     
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    To offer one's all to an angel's heart that longs to accept it in reality, such a beautiful sentiment brotha. The words drifted across the page on a cloud. Do flow on.
     
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    thank u again for the love & visit within the maze of loveth
    and a Angel heart soulfully
     
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