Black Poetry : angels and dreams

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  1. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angels and Dreams

    The angel who calls to me in my dreams
    and dances on the edge of my imagination
    finally became reality recently
    I thought I would be ready to embrace her with 2 open arms
    and seduce her with my romantic charms

    but the unthinkable happened, she took away my breath
    she stole my heart, and shattered my expectations
    the thought of her makes my blood run hot, like a inner cremation
    she is one of God’s most beautiful creations

    it’s not just because she looks like a piece of heaven
    she has a heart that must be crafted from gold
    she has the kind of personality that makes a man feel young
    even after he gets kinda old

    to wake up beside you every day, would be too much for a man to ask
    i would be content with a few years beside you
    even though marriage was not planned in my life
    i would be the happiest man with you as a wife

    just thinking your name makes my heart skip beats
    and leaves my knees so weak, i can hardly stand on my feet
    i don’t know what’s going on, but i need a cure
    i think i might be lovesick but I’m just not sure

    i have such a hard time believing anything that seems too good
    but to make it happen, I’d give all that i could
    your words echo in my head all day
    then when we talk, i barely know what to say
    i know what i want to say, but things are not ready
    thinking of having to wait to see you, makes my heart feel heavy

    i want to open your eyes to the love you seem to desire
    and fan the little flame to that internal fire
    in all the time we’ve talked I’ve yet once to think about sex
    I’d rather whisper in your ear and maybe kiss you on your neck
    it’s beyond something physical with you, i hope you can understand
    all i want to do, is make you happy and forever be your man


    The only thing that makes me wanna hold back is, trying to protect myself from hurt
    i don’t wanna put too much emotion in yet, and then have it not even work
    i will put 100% effort into, making you feel like a queen
    i wish i could afford the whole world, so i could give you anything
    for now all i have to offer is a good mind and a warm heart
    and the promise that nothing could tear us apart (at least on my side of things)

    Derrick
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look I got a question
    can I give this to my boo
    and just for a minute can i pretend
    I thought it up myself (lol)

    for real poet this verse should be a lock for you when she reads it
    it's off the charts and I hate love poems (lol)
     
  3. Aaliyahmonay

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    Well Said My Brotha

    Angels are the most beautiful people who touched the face of this earth. Just imagine being in heaven sitting next to god with the streets of gold. I bless u.


    Aaliyahmonay
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh young love! Good luck!
     
  5. midnightsson

    midnightsson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanx people for your inspiring wordz...young love huh:)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet

    I believe this is my first opportunity at reading you and I must say that i've enjoyed!!! I'll be checkin fa more

    Reas
     
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