Black Poetry : angelicsage (a dedication to a queen)

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    l think of your poetry as a rainbow
    through skies infinite
    each color of love and awareness
    purity and woman
    radiating earth
    with timeless... worth..
    my black Mona Lisa
    portrait hung in my soul.....

    look
    at God's brook so clear
    it's serenity
    and quiet ripple in my ear
    her
    words
    her thoughts of love
    her
    rhythmic imagination
    l
    undergo madd
    saturation
    in her conscience l....

    want you to realize
    recognize
    that you are not only this week's honorable poetess
    but daily the grand prize
    in my eyes
    as
    l
    await to see your shades of woman
    grace me
    time and time again with every
    color
    in your pen
    now, then and forever
    at all rainbows' ends there's always treasure
    you are definitely that....

    infinite,,
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so beautiful and sweet
    a worthy rainbow of poetic treasure indeed
    she will love this .........
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    recognize
    that you are not only this week's honorable poetess
    but daily the grand prize
    in my eyes
    as
    l
    await to see your shades of woman
    grace me

    - j'hiah


    Beautiful tribute to a bewitching woman!
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I usually wait until the honoree
    replies to a tribute before I do...
    but you've penned this soul beautifully
    I couldn't resist.


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  5. Khasm13

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    ahhh yesssss...
    a poem penned from a poetic picture
    of a passionate poetess
    dis was phat
    peace
    khasm
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (First, I would like to say…I’m not a very emotional person but when I logged on and saw this piece, it nearly brought tears. I shared it with my office and one physically developed chill bumps listening to your words, (rave reviews) as I read….wow, I don’t know what to say…...but I felt I should at least try to convey the appreciation I have for this piece. So here it goes.)


    Drowning in the scenery of this morning’s sunrise
    I was…
    Melancholy’s child, uncertain and pensive
    I failed, in my dismay to see the beauty of this new day
    But from my trancelike state
    Wisp the symphony of your embrace
    The strong hand of your words,
    Orchestral and sincere
    The beat of your heart shown through,
    Wiping unseen tears
    Lifting me on wings, heavenly and supreme
    You dazzle me…

    So upon this day I say……Thank you
    And I cover your heart in masses of kisses
    Breaking and sinking……….absorbing
    Into the distant image of you
    You are the melody... hence from my lips,
    That I will sing today……..Infinitely

    J’hiah, your name is a reflection of your soul…..God lives…..in you!

    Sincerely,
    Angelicsage
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $R,
    thanx man. she is a treasure indeed.

    1poetsought,
    that she is.. thanx dun

    cocobutterskyn,
    l feel you. your presence does it all for me, period.
    thanx queen

    khasm,
    yesss! it's all true.
    thanx

    angelicsage,
    as always your heart made known through your words
    lift me.
    you are worthy of this honor and way much more.

    infinite,,
    jh.
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a BEAUTIFUL dedication to a BEAUTIFUL soul :)
     
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    beautiful :) this was just ....man...:D
     
  10. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    i haven't been here very long, to really know her but I've read her work and from what you've written she's lucky to have
    someone as you. this was beautiful, i agree with everyone

    justE
     
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