Black Poetry : Angelic Demon

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  1. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A sacred soul took me whole
    And with one kiss, on the forehead
    I lost consciousness
    Loneliness is an architect
    Constructing me to be only an object
    An unworthy hotel to pain
    A dirty motel of regrets
    And a home sweet home to stupidity
    With this feeling, the night scared me
    But this being set my nightmares free
    Only to disguise themselves to be a dream
    And it was all because of this one individual
    A disciple to my emotions
    Flexible in charismatic languages
    Sensual in orgasmic eye stares
    And deadly by the touch of a hand
    The individual seemed to understand everything about me
    As if they were God’s co-creator
    A savior in a flesh perspective
    Doing me favors without the thought of asking
    Multitasking with healing my wounds
    Opening a curiosity to this love tune
    Musically playing me in different notes
    The antidote to a serious sickness
    A doubt that’s carnivorous
    Which is the fact of losing hope in love’s existence
    And that feeling ate away inside of me
    But this endangered species proved these urban philosophies wrong that
    All men are dogs, all women are hoes
    And yet still we found each other after so long
    Two people can make a difference
    Two people can break the statistics
    Creating a instance where hearts can be innocent
    It made me so proud to be human
    Until the individual hurt me
    And I stayed, then was hurt again, and I still stayed
    So confident of this love, I’d be the first to explain
    How it feels to melt, how real it felt
    Within a situation where I loved in vain
    My angelic demon, my oxymoron
    I continued to be your moron
    Until happiness was all gone, yet my soul said hang on
    I was hollow
    But your sweet words was full of meaning
    They got so hard to swallow
    So I cherished your love each day
    Because you might stop loving me tomorrow
    My Demonic Angel
    The thin line between joy and sadness
    I stood in the middle, hoping to pass this test
    That I believed was from God himself
    Too stupid to conceive God wouldn’t bestow this kind of love on me
    It was I who chose to be tricked voluntarily
    You are my oxymoron, for we are a contradiction
    I want love so bad, but you don’t know how to
    We do not match
    Yet I’m so attached to you
    My Angelic Demon
    My beautiful nightmare
    My comfortable discomfort
    My sweet bitterness
    My trustworthy liar
    My wonderful pain
    My healing disease
    My strong weakness
    My intelligent stupidity
    My dangerous sanctuary
    Freedom’s prison, please listen
    I still love you
    I know you’ve found someone else
    And yet you continue to call me
    I try to resist, but I just can’t help myself
    Because your drugs still control me
    Why is it that the worst things for us
    We console it with our heart’s desire
    I love to fly on your angelic wings
    But no matter how high we go, I still feel the burns from your fire
    Angelic demon, dreamin’ its way of pleasin’ me out of my control
    Angelic demon, schemin’ its way into every season of my soul
    I’ve lost my free will and there’s nothing I can do
    I guess you spend all of your heaven with someone else
    While I’m left to spend all of the hell with you



    Copyrighted 2007
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    good/bad

    are equal it's up to you to find the balance

    positive thinking in the worst of negative is something we need to strive for

    and make a negative into a positive

    you must believe in yourself first

    i can't explain it all hear

    but believe in yourself first

    trust in yourself

    do you trust YOURSELF?

    breaking your mind down into the four quadrants is very difficult

    but if you want it bad enough it will come

    and you won't have to spend time in hell with nobody

    especially your own hell

    good luck poet in your journey
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First of all, I need to say that you are quite talented, your word choice is keen. My thoughts on this... Sometimes we love so hard, that when that person doesn't even treat us kindly any more, we are still in love with what was, not what is. There's this hope that the unkindness is just a phase and will fade, that surely the loving feelings, the core feelings, will return. Masterfully scribed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling every lick u hittin here often we face this and get caught up in it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back to the top.
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Phenomenon
    this poem was awesome,
    Its a sad love poem,
    We should be happy, we are granted free will
    A gift from above, There are just to many
    souls who wants this kind of love.
    Much love to you. Flow on
    Thank for the bump up sister wazi
    This poem is truly touching.

    Peace~N~Love
     
  7. FattnBeautiful

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    Wow that was a wonderful write. It was written so beautifully and it flowed great. I love your word choice. I can feel your pain and passion. So many go through these kinds of emotions. This was a great write.
     
  8. truetothecause

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    Whewww...

    First I'd like to agree with BlueWater in thanking Sis Watz for the up! I missed this back in August.
    Second, I was reminded of something I heard from you before Sis.(Watz) when you said "get out of my head"!

    As I read Brother Phenonmenon I ALWAYS end up with the sense that he is IN MY HEAD!!! Speaking my unspoken thoughts and feelings in a way I could never...

    Thank You Brother Phenonmenon for sharing YOU/M.E.:luvv:

    :hearts2:
     
  9. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that is poetry!
    That was an amazing write!
     
  10. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to agree with cursedheart....truly AMAZING!!! I felt every word of that flow!
     
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