Black Poetry : Angel With Dirty Wings

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She strolled in with a devious smile and a mean walk
    Gleam in her eye, classy style, looks say more than when she talks
    I'm laid back, chillin- watchin shorty move
    She winks at me, I smile, I'm diggin how shorty shakes and grooves
    All eyes on her and she knows it
    But I play it cool, minds blown, but I dont show it
    She glides over, whispers in my ear, asks to go for a walk
    I nod my head, we escape to a place where we can hear and talk

    We talk, we hug, we even kiss, we make plans to see each other again
    I knew a lot, I knew little, I knew I wanted to see her again
    We meet again, got deeper, got closer, went to another level
    She's sophisticated, motivated, and able to apply herself to make life better
    She invited me over, she sets the mood with a c.d., plans were being made in my head
    She walks over, sits on my lap, looks in my eyes, we're kissin, it leads back to the bed
    Things happen, I put it on her, she puts it on me, I'm thinkin its too good to be true
    She's sleep, I'm awake, I'm thinkin, shes dreamin, but dreamin of who?
    We hook up, we're together, shorty got me in a trance
    Guys call her, I dont trip, I give her a chance

    But one night...
    I'm sleep, she's awake, im dreamin, she's whisperin, but whisperin to who?
    I listen, she's gigglin, makin plans for this weekend, shes creepin, but creepin to who?

    I lay in bed, staring off into space, she crawls in, gets close to me
    I'm quiet, she's off to sleep, i make plans to follow her, to see who she chose over me

    She's beautiful, she's smart, she fooled me with her curves- the way they sing
    See yall even beautiful women cheat, down to play and swurve
    -she was an angel with dirty wings

     
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    well posed and said i've laid in dis bed
    she was as sweet as candy
    but she was dirty and low down
    now she can't hear a sound
    her play was strip away
    indeed they cheat all so true but wit who!
    she left no clue
    so what's left to do ..................MOVE !

    i really like dis u came correct and real
    deep inside of what a man can feel
    thankz 4 sharing dis here
     
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    aww! what a sad story. but its true.even an angles have dirty wings. liked your story.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you, god bless.
     
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    very tyte flow.......unfortunately we dont know who the bad peeps r until they do us dirty........keep ya head up, much love
     
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    durty droplets of dust and water drop from her delicate wings
    ohhhhhhh!!!! how this venom stings
    as harpies sing
    and remind
    check the mind/soul and peep
    cause beauty is not skin deep...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    ight khasm13........tyte flow..........much love......... :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was sad but it was deep angels with dirty wings are the worst women to fall for :) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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