Black Poetry : ANGEL"S DREAM

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Angel need lovin too
    it's not about me & u
    under the halo of truth

    Angel heart lay in a dream
    to be love caressed to a scream
    warm affection of fairy smoke
    sweet compassion da soul hope

    singing tulips in the rain
    run like pedals catching flames
    heart beat deep in the sleep
    of a angel's love that weep
    through the mental vision mirror
    holds a picture perfect faith
    a wish so bright

    There's nothing more i'd want to do
    is make ANGEL dream come true
    through this dream is seen
    the evening sun alight as doves
    with fragile wings to heart of love
    upon the terraced walk and above
    engaged in heavenly talk & rubs
    Angel need lovin too

    Dreaming of the future concealed
    from the earth crowed remembering
    the past, laced with clouds drifting aloaf

    this dreaming Angel lone this touch
    soulful helm into one's clutch
    to trigger ambition
    sweet journey deep sleep angel love
    quietly weeps

    Sweet symphony of love for victory
    cometh unpon the dream nothing
    better to make it true so Angel can
    hear the whispers of I LOVETH YOU !
    dream flash lashing at side mentally
    where the depth reside warm tango
    of indingo love rise wit desire a fire
    burns high a yearn of compromise

    so from above i so watch ova thy
    Angel of beauty wit embracement.
    So when one dreamth again
    down from heaven's gate above
    my kisses will hold in love
    to keep the dreammin safe and free
    caress it gentle and tenderly
    happy dreams u fine in the slumber
    of night tyme shine, i be stand their
    wit humble warm lovin care
    ANGEL's DREAM too coz of the love
    for me and u

    Dreameth Angel Dream,I'm near by far
    but deep in heart i so stain the glass
    and the vision of dreams i am thee sleep!

    An Angel Dreameth of lovin.............. :
    angel1:
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    Dyamond Dream 2005
    Nu~wave Creation $R
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayum this was wheeeew.... awesome right here.... oh yeah
    Wow you done this perfectly ok ok ya know i am speechless this was wow
    It is like my thoughts were written Rich this was wow

    QQn you peepin in my dreams

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angels need love, because Angels give nothing but love
    I second that emotion...this is so beautifully written. You are a "Treasure" to behold.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you from my heart to yours happy u like the dreameth of an Angel

    Thankz queentswana and no ur a treasure a black gold mine most humble'd

    y'all beautiful black Goddess................thank u
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your welcome...just love how you brought this vision into play...
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was truly beautiful...
     
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    thank u sista for the warm embrace on this sweet Angel of dream
     
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    That was so beautiful
    I think I'm goona cry.
    Just lovely
     
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    aweeeeeee sweet_baby_face
    thank u so much that was so warm in ya words
    weep not just behold thy loveth
     
  10. Ireadastory

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    Let me get my 2 cents in... This piece is so beautifully written. That is a true gift that you possess. Thank u for sharing your gift.
     
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