Black Poetry : Angel of the Sea

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  1. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel of the Sea


    From crystal waters rises an angel:
    beaming with pride, Father Sun
    casts her slender shadow upon the sands.
    I, a man,
    transfixed, awed, await
    her coming forth.

    A vision does not lie: she comes
    and freely creates my dream --
    we embrace as lovers would;
    her soft breasts push
    against my trembling, pulsating skin;
    she awakens the god within
    and on a shore of paradise
    we indulge ourselves.

    With her, shame bears no meaning;
    nor guilt, nor embarrassment.
    Together we understand
    the Creator is honoured by our love
    shared with bodies entwined;
    together we understand
    our eternal state of beingness.
    Even as I watch and feel,
    I, the man,
    realize I make her dream of flesh
    come alive.
    To the gentle Earth she gifts her presence;
    for her she conceives the Star Born child
    from my loins
    and together now,
    the angel of the sea and the man
    henceforth walk hand and hand
    upon this blessed land...
     
  2. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the images that u build and how u describe the emotions so deeply yet plain and simple for everyone to understand what this angel of the sea means to you..

    lo'
     
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    you painted a vivid lovely picture for me... -7:spinstar:
     
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    windwalker.


    this was tranquil beauty... personfied in scribe
    & i am lovin' your flow, poet!! well done, indeed!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    Awesome flow. Thank you for this.

    Saleem
     
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