Black Poetry : Angel In Disguise

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  1. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel In Disguise

    So as stated I had intentions for someone I’d like the boy to meet
    To get to know unknown to him this is where the boy meets the world
    All through the heart mind and soul of this girl
    Introductions given they proceed to conversation
    All is well as they compose playful and pure relations
    Consisting of smiles laughs there was something to be seen
    Unknown to her that this would be the man aforementioned in her dreams
    As for him he would see her in his drunken raged nightmares
    But on the surface you don’t see signs of such anywhere
    For now both of them are simply caught up in each other
    Hints n gestures at something more perhaps a future is in store
    The bond grows as they connect through her deepest of woes
    The boy bear witness to the mightiest of her foes
    Through the course of one night
    It would seemed to be that a romance was to take flight
    All the components were there physical mental sexual
    The two just recently bonded over the emotional
    The next day it resumes again the laughs love and bonding
    Feelings reside in her which is why she stays smiling
    Such is the beauty of life a blessing from God but inside resides tension
    The girl may walk with God but the devil keeps following
    The boy is a child of God but the devil keeps calling
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done i truely enjoyed this joint
     
  3. Mikha'el

    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you kindly =-]

    if it werent so true =-[
     
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    Life is God's blessing

    don't worry

    she'll die of aids cause that's what she intended to do

    don't u get it

    "magic john son"

    :lol:

    he living with h i v ( H) and what is an I V

    it's a drip into ur blood


    you write very well.
     
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    Mikha'el Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm i'm confused as to ur remarks but thank you for the compliment
     
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