Black Poetry : Angel - From The Series Fla Meets Ny "The Union of Opposites"

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel
    By Manasiac
    From The Series – Fla Meets Ny “A Union of Opposites”

    She came from a place unknown to this world
    I know I do not have the skills to attract this kind of girl

    She is an Angel from afar
    She came into my life
    While I was healing my life’s scars

    She took me in

    Failures and All
    Told me it takes a strong man to get up from a fall

    Angel I praise you

    I told her I was not even worthy to touch her wings
    She told me that I should never say such things
    She said I came to you for a reason
    Maybe this is your season

    Angel I praise you

    My Angel is beautiful like the heavens she which she came
    I never knew a jester like me
    Would roll with such a phenomenal dame

    But in reality

    She was trying to say to me

    That I was an Angel too
    And that even though I had a felonious past
    I was still an Angel of virtue

    Angel
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwe a love joint...

    This was so beautiful...I'm sure your girl loved this

    Been waiting for you to drop something ManasiaStyle... :kickball:

    Peace and Blessings,
    Sage
     
  3. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya for the love :)
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh wow... that is so beautiful... honestly...
    :crying: :crying: :cry: :cry: let me get ma kleenex...

    aaw.... sweet, she must've really touched the speaker huh?
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, this was SO sweet. I'm sure she will love reading this. Flow on brotha.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QQ...Mani this you

    boy you laid this out....tight read
    and i enjoyed this one

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yall.
     
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    lookee here lookee here lookee here :read: :D
    awwwww mani
    see i knew it would onlee be a matter of time
    because as much as you love to push buttons...
    your "one" was soon to come
    and what a beautiful muse she must be in order to inspire such moving emissions that could only be "poetry" :)
    hehehe GO MANI GO MANI LOL
     
  9. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love the poem!!
     
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