Black Poetry : Angel from Darkness

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :angel1:
    From the lonelyness
    and the deep darkness
    came this angel to light
    she wasn't the average
    wit da white gown golden wings
    but one who rise wit jeans
    and halter top fly pumps
    to love her was like dippin
    in the rays of sun and meeting
    the heavy windz
    it's like committing self to a
    love pain and facing da heart
    of rapid beat from the darkness
    survivor for love composed
    where starz now shine
    her smile brighten me to warmth
    her voice soft and light like
    air and body as of cotton
    her hair was brisky and weaved
    in silk skin butter smooth she
    was an angel from darkness
    passing through my dream land
    awakening wit memories
    knowing she will return again
    she now my darken beauty
    that live beside me on the
    temple of reality at night
    Angel of darkness :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a sweet serene angel to have by ones side, this had a very peaceful feel to it.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight flowing very warm and peaceful
    love the feelin of ease i get when i read this
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u watz for feeling what i feel

    Thanks angel for getting that warmnest i felt
     
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    WOW!
    I actually had to
    stop for a second
    and I swear I saw
    your Angle!
    You described her
    well! She is very
    beautiful when
    she smiles!
    Lovely imagery!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sistah it's amazing what a vision
    can bring to light
     
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    And to light/sight did she come...anything that's done in the dark...comes to the light...not to mention she was a "soul angel" :luv: ...I felt I was creeping into someone's dream :lol:
    this was so sweet and mellow...carry on...
     
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    THANKZ Queentswana
    ya peeping in means a lot enter da dream sistah
     
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    Rich, I have not fully appreciated your style and talent. Now I get it... You are sick wit it...don't stop

    Nic
     
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    THIS WAS A NICE FLOW BRO!!!!
    THE ANGEL IS NEAR!!!!
    WELL DONE!!
     
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