Black Poetry : ~~~~Angel Dust~~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No subtle hints…
    whirling and
    Free falling yet flying
    Left completely on earth,
    But my feet never touch the ground.

    Deliciously high,
    Almost supernatural.
    Clearing the thin line between
    Reality and bliss.
    I’m there
    I’m free
    I’m beautiful
    I’m floating beyond this world.
    Swirls
    And all kinds of smooth curls.
    Leave me spinning
    Leave me ending and beginning again and
    Again.
    Bathing in psychedelic pools of
    Pleasure as it burns through my
    Veins like fever.
    I’m scorched,
    I’m parched
    I’m brand new and easy….so breezy.
    I’m all that.
    My body’s wound on
    Cheap cigarettes and your sweet
    Angel dust by the pounds,
    The tears of a clown
    Compliment your reverbs and nouns.

    Your potency feels so dayum good to me!
    Picking me up,
    Oooh don’t you dare put me down!
    Leave me up and spinning
    In the expanse of the earth never to
    Touch the ground.
    I’m feeling good,
    I’m feeling wonderful; mellow and easy
    To your habit-forming, breezy Angel Dust.

    Copyright 2004
    “Son of the Day Star” Publishing
    “Poeta Nascitur, Non Fit!”
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a spray of that angel dust, let me ride on this plane of comfort...
    yet reading this first I felt the wetness, then the breeze and then I floated.
    wonderful piece, I enjoyed reading it.
     
  3. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My queen,
    You never cease to be a complete blessing to me. God bless love.
    Love eternal; simply stated, deeply meant and felt.
     
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    hit me wit da angel dust
    dis was very tytely droped
    flow on
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! This is beautifully dropped! I understand what you're sayin.
     
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    That lovely feeling, like you're floating in air. Yes, you've captured that here poet, very well.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so wonderful and I thank you so much for your beauty.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gemp thank you so much! You mean so much to me.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much ma. You are a constant blessing to me and I thank you so much for your beauty.
     
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    there are just some phrases, stanzas and lines
    that give that poetic TKO...these did it for me

    Thanks for the read!

    Pay this love forward :wink:
    ~~Sage~~