Black Poetry : And ..............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 3, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And ...
    what about

    the dreams
    the hope
    the love
    and those promises

    what has really happend
    and where
    did all the caring and
    concern go

    And ...
    what about

    the yesterdays
    the todays
    the tomorrows
    and those years yet to come

    what went wrong
    and where
    did all the caring and
    concern go

    And ...
    what about
    us? ....

    And ...
    when exactly
    where you planning
    to let me know???




    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at some point and time, the "ands" no longer matters and the losses are to be buried under new beginnings...
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PROFOUNDLY AND HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL!

    Never amazed at the Destee men.
    Besides being talented they are real men.
    Speaking of love and emotion without shame.
    Questioning answers, looking at blame.
    When we examine the spiritual self...
    No one can damage us but ourselves!
    That you recognize that something is
    wrong...
    Getting it right won't take long.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    clueless huh?!!! Don't you hate that!!! or shall I say dislike dhat... but either ways.. its a nuisance. But i like the flow... I see you still putting it down tight...
     
  5. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I completely agree w/ brotherman.

    but , an " and... " -- , it's honest, cuz the heart
    needs cushion to the blow.

    It's like, someone can be hurting us, but
    we still search for some meaning, some motive, something.

    - Big Sis ! , N2oursouls - you reach.

    this was felt.
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maticulous flow......I love the way your words and your phrases take my eyes, heart and mind on that pleasant trip...down to the bottom line! (you's a bad *** sista, and you know it!) :heart:

    alyce
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good questions
    nice flow
     
  8. eternalprince

    eternalprince Active Member MEMBER

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    simply perfect. I have been there and you say it better than I ever could.