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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My arms may never hold you
    again and
    my mouth may never
    meet your's again and
    my touch may not be
    graced by your skin
    and........my tears
    may never reach your hands again
    and....my heartbeat may
    never play in unison with
    your's again....and our eyes
    may not hold the same picture of us

    but....

    my life has been heightened by
    your existence.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes it's better that way. you spoke my heart in this peace here. I have someone like that in my life but for reasons only known to him, he had to leave. I am truly better to have met him than not to. He taught me a lot. I know I am better for it. Thank you dear brotha


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  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    This is an exquisite piece of Verb'oetry'.


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA POETIC

    PEN IS OVA FLOWIN'
    I'M LOVE EVERY DRIP U DROP
    MY BRUTHA KEEP ME ON MY TOES!!
    MO MO MO!!!!!:toast:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...

    And... you took it to da next level! Applause!

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    *sigh*
    just beautiful

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  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yous again and agin and again...

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