Spoken Word : AND YOU WANT TO TALK?

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  1. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that you have fed your sexual appetite

    And you no longer have that hunger that drove you to make rash decisions in record-breaking time.
    Or forced others to make rash decisions for you in record-breaking time…because you just couldn’t be a man about this thang, and just say, YOU need some strange… And I was just too far away, for you to hit THIS today.
    Can we talk?

    Now that you can think clearly,

    Got that damned monkey off of your back.
    Running towards my forest, in no time flat.
    The same forest that you couldn’t see because of your testosterone trees.
    Trees refused to allow my sun to shine. Because of there {come - hither} branches and estrogen leaves.


    Now that you are consumed with guilt, want to take me on some type of mind trip…
    All that drama, I’m relaxing, I ain’t trying to hear that ****.

    You need to relax, take a long walk inside my forest, along my mountainside
    Allow the breeze from my trees to Blow upon your guilt-ridden mind,
    Put out the fire that burned with an uncontrollable amount of heat that singed every thought of your being free, every thought of true reality. Every thought that you had to be, tied down to only me…

    Ya See....Inside my forest way back where the stream branches and the water trickle over rocks quietly leading the way to the flow of my soul.
    There, you will find no pressure for commitment just a constant trickle of you and I, overflowing with some of that "lets do this"…

    So baby please don’t allow guilt to consume you because she wasn’t me…because trust me, He could never be you. Still wanna talk?

    Written By: Tia Y Duncan (Williams) – 7/02©
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice love to hear this in spoken word......
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your thoughts mean alot...

    :grouphug: Thank you...

     
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    :devil: :hot: Represent sista, this was a tight, tight flow!! I loved it


     
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    THANK YOU!!!! JAZZYMOONCHILD...THANK YOU! :spin:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Beautiful_by_me...

    I absolutely loved it. :D Still :lol: off of "Still wanna talk?"

    I can't stop smiling. :D

    I'd love to hear you read this in voice chat. You should drop by and let us entertain you as you entertain us with your talent.

    "Still wanna talk?" hahahahaahaaa

    :thanks: for sharing a part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you....I'm starting to feel like, maybe I do have a little :jumping: talent...Tia




     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your talent goes without saying. Yes it was a wonderful and rare piece of work...keep pushing the pen.
     
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    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :star: :star: :star: THANK YOU :star: :star: :star:
    :grouphug:
    :

    The talent that you speak of...will find a home within the hearts that embraces it.
    :heart: :grouphug: :heart:


    :bowdown: Therefore your "Talent" :bowdown:
    is housed by me...be blessed
    Tia
     
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    GYMEFORTE Active Member MEMBER

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    VERY DEEP INDEED,STOP BY,LOOK MY FLOWS UP,GET INTO MY HEAD..
    UNTILL THEN
    GYMEFORTE
     
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