Black Poetry : And You Are...?

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was something I sort of learnt how to do on another forum (not to worry was a long time agoo before I found my home destee). They give you the first 2 words of each line and the rest you have to fill in yourself. Anyway I thought it was a good idea, here's what I came up with.


    And You Are...?

    I am... the darkness that surrounds you
    I wonder... do you ever feel me near?
    I dream... of the day that you will see what it is
    I see...
    I want... you to understand why things are this way
    I will... make you see the real me
    I need... to know what it is for
    I don't... understand your ways or fears
    I wont... be ignored anymore for
    I remember... the consequences of the times before
    I am... the shadows of your thoughts.


    7/1/01

    *Emma*
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emma...i am lovin' it! it flows, fa show! keep on scribin', gurl.


    ~~~jusletitflo~~~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I am ..... the lover of heart
    I live.....for the smiles of ya face
    I giveth.......my whole beings
    I wonder.... what lay ahead to be learned
    I seek .....wisdom from within
    I knoweth.... whom be of lovin'
    I know .....ya soul is in full bloom
    I wish .....upon da star u glow in
    I feel .......da depth in ya vibe
    this piece is tyght and sweet u go gurl flow on!!!!
     
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    i am...the cool caress of a summer's breeze
    i wonder...do you feel me?

    i dream...of golden sunsets along rivers and streams
    i see...the wondrous beauty surrounding me

    i want...a smiling heart to start my day
    i will...never take for granted what your soul has to say

    i need...above all else, to feel secure
    i don't...know about succumbing to failure or fear

    i won't...walk away from anything i know to be right
    remember...ing my first love, in the middle of the night

    i am...baller

    THANKS FOR ALLOWING ME TO JOIN YOU.:)
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listerscribin' - Thanks heaps. I'm glad you liked it.

    Rich - Great to c u join the party. Thank you so much for taking the tyme to create your own. Much love.

    Baller - Thanks for adding your own piece. I enjoyed reading it.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and thank u 4 ya touch of beauty u pose in ya art work...
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin the appreciation Rich
    peace to ya
    *Emma*
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow I enjoyed the read