Black Poetry : ....And Then

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....And Then
    By Monad.poetress



    You love and are loved
    and then its over
    No more kisses
    No more hugs
    .....And then you cry
    because your love has said goodbye
    ....And then you are alone
    Your love is gone
    Your love has left you to love someone else
    ....to live in someone else's home
    Cause all their love for you is gone
    You cry at night and you cannot sleep
    All you do is cry and weep
    .....And then your sleep finally comes
    .....but not before long morning comes
    Cause your pain outlasts night's fallen darkness
    .....And even though you sleep you do not rest
    ......And then morning comes and you wish for love to come back
    You wish for all the things that your life does now lack
    But love never returns as sweet as before
    But you wish for the same love to walk through the door
    ......And then life changes
    Yet you shall never love again
    Never again allowing love to be your friend
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was deep ....
    beautifull posed...
    it kept me thinking...



    yes we are fragile...

    fragile....




    but we love..

    cause we in need of...





    make shure its the right kind of love...






    keep writting sis:heart:
    lovin it..







    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a heart is broken, we don't want to relive that pain...very emotive write, well done.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Princess,

    My sister, it hurts now, I know, but you will love again, and you will be ready in your time. Peace and blessings.
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

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    tyte scribe. emotively written. reminded me of all the restless n sleepless nights i had .keep ur head up.much love :)
     
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    this was so touching
    and so real...
    for it is the story
    of anyone who has
    ever been a casualty
    of love's cruel game...

    well posed...