Black Poetry : And then I Appeared

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  1. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And Then I Appeared



    It was with God’s…Blue Rayne

    The clouds

    The thunderous skies

    The lightning flash

    Was just God at work creating me..

    Your perfect peace

    He wanted your sadness

    So he rained me

    Your beautiful hue

    To brighten your days

    He wanted your pain

    So he showered down me

    To nurture you

    He wanted your madness

    So he poured me

    To understand you…

    Thirst no more

    Find rest in your mind, heart and soul

    For He loved you so much

    He opened the weathered skies

    And then I Appeared

    Blue Rayne…

    Together we are completed.

    We shall reign!

    Signed: me

    **special note: I wrote this piece the other day in reponse to a poem this guy wrote to another lady and her nic was Blue Rayne hope yall injoyed**

    Ms J
     
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    this was a sweet piece....keep flowing
    one love
    khasm
     
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    :eek: Rain on me poet, I love this style. :jumping:
     
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    shower my day in grace
    flow on poetess
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smauhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you guy's are the greatest!! much much love to you all... Ms J
     
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    ahhh. the inspiration of one pen to another's this peace/piece i shall plant in the meadow of serentiy where i rest and allow it to grow into...

    a flowerbed of inspiration for me....

    great piece poet...

    one.
     
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    A shower of sweetness personified, your pen is on fire poet.
     
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