Black Poetry : ...And Then he came....

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was toiling broken paths of branches and rocks
    My feet hurt, tears streamed..and my heart flopped
    I promised myself I would swear off men
    Promised I wouldn't allow myself to hurt again
    I was so tried of cryin
    Dealin with sorry Ni66as steady lyin
    I was mentally abused and physically turned out
    My body was hooked my mind was full of grout
    My future was uncertain and my past spoke of pain
    I wanted to find love in someone who had to gain
    I tried spreadin my legs and found very little...
    But just as my heart turned cold and brittle.......

    He Came.....

    He exploded into my life with his smile
    I'd had known him for quite a while
    I fell lightly ;like a schoolgirl crush..
    My mind said "Better not let him thrust"
    But I looked at him and Anyone could see that he was fine
    He was going away to college so i can't make him mine
    My body wanted some release, my mind was tellin me don't do a dummy
    For If i fell back into carnal sin, I know Id feel crummy
    I look at him him though and yet, i don't know.....
    My Mind stays stop now...But my body is like......"Fu*k it...Go......
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooooooooooo good....girl!!! i'm lovin' it...
     
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    Ohhh My...I like this one.
     
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    lol tyte depiction of temptation
    and the internal struggles
    Peace
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Lovely & Rico :heart: :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you skybe :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you skybe :)
     
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    fighting for the right to feel.........feeling for the right to fight.
    doing what comes naturally.........naturally.

    the river is flowing.
     
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    lol i like how u said the endin, but this was tyte... keep em comin...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you poet n baller. Poet, I'm glad tha you liked the ending :)
     
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