Black Poetry : And the Wind Blew

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the wind blew,
    sending your aura my way.
    So now it has bonded,
    determined to stay
    in my heart,
    in my soul,
    your aura has
    assumed its role
    in my life.
    Can't dismiss it,
    the feeling has saturated
    my essence, it's that explicit.
    I guess your aura filled
    that open space,
    that deep chasm that simply
    didn't want to be a lonely place.
    So, I'll accept this,
    your aura, within my heart
    and into my mind.
    It has become an integral part
    of me, daily, as I breathe
    in and out, delighting
    and partaking in the same
    intoxicating, inviting
    aura that the wind
    compassionately
    sent my way.
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a good way to start my morning. Refreshing is the word I would use for this piece. I identify with the feelings expressed. Good job poet

    Peace and love
     
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    Sweet flow, watz, and really vibin the concept.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just love how u expressed the aura of a soul
    unto yours i love it ......
     
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    very refreshing......vibe was sweet
    thanks for sharin with us....
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A good way to start the morning? I appreciate that, twision, thankyou, and welcome to destee!
    Glad you liked the concept behind the words gempis, thanks.
    Rich thank you for letting me know you loved the way I expressed this.
    Wasn't sure at first how I'd pose this vibe, thanks, mzblkangel.
     
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    nice one sis...feeling that breeze..love how you capture the vibes in this flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Bluewater, for feelin the breeze in this vibe.
     
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    Sister...
    I truly know how this feels...
    yet you captured it soooo perfectly...

    "that deep chasm that simply
    didn't want to be lonely place"...


    Yes, I loved this part!...
    Beautiful work!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, sometimes there is a hole in the heart that feels as deep as a chasm....thank you, angelicsage, I appreciate your response to this.
     
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