Quiet Poetry Lounge : ....And The Stars Weep (inspired by the moon sleeps)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Jun 1, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crested horizions
    with shades of daylight dying
    giving birth to a new oblivion...
    to the truest shades of blue-
    diamond freckles twinkling
    winking from afar...
    blinking morse codes messages that whisper...
    i will always love only you-
    blank space converging
    merging into hyperspace
    transcending into cyberspace
    to create a whole new venue-
    falling off the beaten path
    and stumbling onto the path less taken
    soul bare and heart forsaken
    while i vainly search for remnants of you...
    the stars in your eyes,
    the moonbeams on your cheeks,
    the sunlight in your smile,
    and the breeze lilting under your touch
    unfurling in such
    undulating passion
    while i wander and wonder
    pondering immortal thoughts
    of crusades to lead me back to you-
    back into your arms
    back into your graces
    back into your life,
    redeemed by your salvation...
    barreling on in my journey...
    infinitly searching for your love and redemption
    from my foolish sins
    and the secrets that i keep
    guided by the trail of tears the stars shed
    while they protect their beloved moon
    while he sleeps.

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  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>appears from nowhere>

    Whoa! My poem inspired this?!?
    As always I am speechless. Your words move me. I am glad I could inspire such a poem. I'm at a loss for words, let me go and collect my thoughts.

    <disappears<...
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SGS

    What a beautiful poem sista.

    This one really has a calming effect.
    Thanks for sharing it!

    Oneluv.
     
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    i guess the little one is back in the saddle...

    displaying her talents
    to the far reaches of the universe
    as the stars and moon converse
    in galactic languages

    speak your words, poet.
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    isn't that like cheating?

    being that you are the goddess of all things celestial isn't it easy for you to create a brilliant poem about the stars weeping?

    (just teasin' darlin')

    u showed yo poetic beee-hind on this one

    and what a BIG poetic behind it is!!!

    sean
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *blush*

    thanks for the kind praise yall!

    i know i been mia and i havent been able to respond to folks stuff while im here at work at all....

    it shuts down when i try....

    but ima try to post something real quick and yall just know that im always here....reading and enjoying...wishing yall could hear my thoughts and know how much love i wanna give yall....

    yall should know who yall are by now!!!


    always humbled....

    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think you already know what a lovely piece this is, dear poetess. very enjoyable, it is. i absolutely admire your word usage and the flo on this piece as it moves me. quite nyce, dear friend.

    ~~~simplydivinelovepoetry~~~
     
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