Black Poetry : " ... and so do you. "

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hypnotize, Apr 16, 2001.

  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " ... and so do you ! "



    I eat un-organic, " organic "
    chemically enhanced it , pesticide inplanted
    Fruit that the bugs of the earth won't even touch...
    ... and so do you.

    I work next to smiling idiots who actually
    believe that the Civil War was fought to end slavery ...
    ... and so do you.

    I diagnose my children w/ ADHD and etc.
    pump them full of Ridilin and etc.
    just to make them stop jumping around,
    making noise , acting like CHILDREN and etc.
    cuz I work too long and hard trying to make
    a living to actually handle
    LIVing w/ and raising my kids ...
    ... and so do you.

    " Thank you officer, please may have
    41 more bullets in my *** ? "
    and he says " Sure, no prob "
    and I bleed my white casket an innocent/glowing
    red...
    ... and so do you.

    I jack off ... and so do you.
    I use check stubs for neckrubs
    and masturbate my life away
    pumping my dry life into daily planners,

    " **** !, things keep happening in my life
    and it's ******* up my schedule. "

    " **** !, things keep happening in my schedule
    and it's ******* up my life."
    I pencil in the un-expected,
    ... and so do you.

    I toxic waste my insides w/ burgers and fries,
    and kool-aid strong enough to permanantly stain
    counter tops --- yet , ocassionally eat an apple
    cuz it's " healthy " ...
    ... and so do you.


    I Must See TV... ... and so do you.

    Thinking " Hell if the revolution WILL be televised,
    I'll just sit here w/ the remote
    and colt45 "
    Cope 45 yrs. w/ broken and died peers
    in unspoken or cried tears
    ... I believe I'm right...
    ... and so do you.

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    Honestly,
    i didn't plan on writing this.
    I promised myself not to post any more poetry
    until I had caught up on reading
    more of YOUR poetry ( dear poets and friends ) .
    But ya'll post soooo much !!! LOL !.

    I don't know, this whole
    David Horowitz, Cincinnatti ****
    just has me bugged right now.

    I'll probably make some amendments
    to this and read it at the Renna -
    but you guys are the first to see it.

    thank you -
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...

    ...you, definitely, have a Hypnotize-ing flow. *Lovin' the depth, upon depth, of this flow* :D :D
     
  3. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    responding

    tank ya !!!
    Maple, are you a guy or a girl ? I 4get.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HYPNOTIZE....

    ...i've been waiting for you!! :)

    & it was definitely worth da wait! (as always)

    keep doin your thang... cause sometimes you
    just gotta let it out!!...

    FeelinYourFlowAlways...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definitely...

    ...and undoubtedly, a girlie...
     
  6. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A genius scribe...

    So contemporary in it's outlook and treatment of the subject
    I'm loving this 'Hyp'...in my humble opinion...it is perfect the way it is no need for further editing. It is as raw as it needs to be...it speaks like a College professor...turned...street Hobo...from the neighbourhood corner...if you get my drift.

    Excellent scribe poet!!

    *me-too*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESSSSS!! I AGREE WIT DA FAMILY YA FLOW IS
    A PIECE OF GOLDEN RIPPLE U LAID IT DOWN
    WOW!
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    Sunshyne - maaan - I can't find your poem
    to that secret somebody you had in here ,
    did you ever reveal who he was ?
    And - you're right, sometimes we all just
    HAVE TO LET IT OUT - but I get
    sooooooo much enjoyment from reading you and the others.
    It's a pleasure to be in ya'll's company.
    wordbond.


    College professor turned Hobo ??
    LOL - !!! - whoa ,
    and what do you mean * me too * ???????
    thanks !

    Rich, thanks man -
    ( where's my bottle of ripple ? ) LOL
     
  9. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHHHH...............T

    LEF A BRUVA SPEECHLESS HYP. ****!!!

    ONE !

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp, I pencil in the un-expected heat of this piece poet and later go back over it with permanent ink. I also stand and applaud you on this flow. When will it end.


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