Black Poetry : And she still don't get no love!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why you don't come around no mo?
    How come you ain't in the show?
    You don't get down with a daily flow?
    Is it cause you don't get no love no mo?
    Came and spread love and wisdom more than most...
    Spreading it like butter on cinnamon toast.
    Found the errors and corrected her ways....
    Still she longs for yesterdays.
    Singing poetical lyrical phrases
    Leaving messages to give them and amaze's em
    But it' don't matter when the last letter is dropped.
    Cause it won't stop
    And she still don't get no love!
    So her poetry pen lies cold and unmoving
    Her spirit helper on hiatus awakening
    Foundations shaken
    Rules breaken
    And she still don't get no love!
    OH WELL!
    BJS(C)2002
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    did you write this for me?!?!?
    cuz i really been feeling this way lately...
    how often recently have I been longing for things to be the way they were yesterday...
    and all I want is to be received in Unity and Peace
    but where is all the love?

    MANY BLESSINGS UNTO YOU
    keep doin what you do gyrl you are a :star:
    2fish
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like u scribe dis one on my honor
    da love fades and new vision control
    so my pen lay still but i try again to be heard !
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    no love?
    ...
    the river flows
    abundantly
    overflowing with joy...and ecstasy
    for you
    for your pen
    for the joy of reading
    each syllable
    each phrase
    each sentence of you.:)

    continue your flow
     
  5. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep the pen movin and you will eventually receive that love that you deserve. good peace. i enjoyed.
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was great and i've always love this line "Still she longs for yesterdays"
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girlfriend

    keep on keepin on
    cause with words like this ...you create your own love !

    Natasha
     
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