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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Momma say smile
    The day will come
    With no worries
    And the pain will fade……

    She kept her head up…

    In the wind she stands
    Lost and cold….
    Wishing and praying
    For that day to come
    Momma said don’t let
    No one take your joy….

    But it faded….
    She became a product
    Of a crazy world
    Momma said
    Momma said…..

    Well

    13 yrs later condemn
    In a messed up world
    Trying to focus on reality
    But the pain seeps
    And the hurt grows
    Her pillow is her best friend
    Making her bed
    Now she lays in it
    As it soaks the pain
    And burns like the opening of
    A fire pit...flame coming from a dark soul…
    As the life fades and the world
    Turns in circles…..

    Momma said keep your head up
    No matter the pain…you shall rise

    But
    Lost in a world that burns like hell
    Cold in the heat been stab and left
    To bleed…smothered in her on pain
    Can’t release
    No where to go…
    False faces all around
    Reaching out but nothing is there

    Momma ….what am I trying to see
    its nothing there
    Just living to die
    Dying to live
    I walk in sorrow…as the tears run
    Wondering if it will every be
    For the pain I carry
    Hidden inside

    Momma tell me
    I need to know
    Why must I fight this hard to live
    The pain shots like lighting
    as I carry my weight….

    Momma said lift your head up
    Child…..

    And there you will see…


    (C)2004
    untitled life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE CREATIVITY WAS AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    love how u did this one flow on
     
  3. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was pure fire. Too hot. Too too hot. I enjoyed this piece.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich..wow you got me blushing

    AfroBoricuaRoni..happy you enjoyed

    Thank you both for the love and support on this scribe

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome my dear flow on !
     
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    oh sis
    this is so sweet :)

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Whoa! This piece is a thing of beauty, sister.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the support and love
    Peace
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