Black Poetry : and now (just lay with me)

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  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's getting dark
    darker and darker
    I ease down a tunnel
    illuminated by only
    a hollow glow i can't locate

    heart beating faster now
    faster and faster
    can't catch my breath
    the panting becomes rhythmic
    mouth begins to water
    body starts to tremble

    I feel myself slipping
    muscles tense
    fists clinch
    fear sets in
    mind racing
    with questions i can't answer
    should i go
    should i stay
    is this right
    am I gonna be ok

    the door has a voice now
    gently calling me
    a hand reaches out
    grabs my soul
    and surrounds my spirit

    can't hold on any longer
    feels good to let go
    the catharsis of emotion
    opens me
    with supreme intensity
    trust involved
    sensually desired
    love inspired
    eststacy

    and now
    your kisses have me cummng
    back to reality
    feeling your warmth on top of me
    with my eyes still closed
    I feel your soul(full) beauty

    and now
    that we breathe the same breaths
    share the same space
    beat the same beat
    just lay with me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed we share da same beat
    forth by heart da mental minds lay
    together .

    dis here was tyght.........thanks 4 da beautiful walk inside
     
  3. A007

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    thanks rich....i like that mental minds lay together
     
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    "and now
    that we breathe the same breaths
    share the same space
    beat the same beat
    just lay with me"

    just lovin that!
     
  5. A007

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    thank you LiLi glad u liked it.
     
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