Black Poetry : and nothing...happened?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Dec 11, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...Purple McKinsee's journal of...
    -----------------------------------------

    because last night...
    it seemed so gray
    cloudy...
    as if it were a haze
    of catatonic
    proportion...
    yeah...nothing

    i sit now
    with my legs
    crossed under the desk
    like a ceremonial
    closing of...
    "the bridge"
    to the side of your...
    well...
    happiness

    still...

    i reminisce on
    the scenes
    that had us
    almost void
    of our...self
    it was both...
    magical and terrifying
    taking the next step...
    then crossing over...

    you were more excited
    than i...was

    so...we...
    went there and now
    we are back...
    to what used to be
    before...

    so...
    last night...
    it seemed so gray
    cloudy, even...
    like a haze....

    MsDLite (c) 12.01
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** sis!

    pleeeeeeeez don't be soooooo mean!!!!!!!!!!!!! (hayans all in tha air)

    *SHAT!

    a

    *"Destee-ism"
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (smiling)...

    ...gurl, i had to holla...
    you know a sis ain't mad
    although...

    some sista...would be at the
    sit'chation...

    men folk~
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tellatroofanyhow! feelyafeelya!
     
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    o'kay...o'kay...

    so the brutha was a little excited
    ...couldn't contain himself
    'round the luciousness of
    the dliteful one.:)
    you can't blame him
    coz you're ALL THAT
    and his
    CONTROL
    kinda sorta
    got away from him:) and all
    it's yo' fault
    for being who you are
    ...all that you are
    make a brutha jump through hoops
    to cross that BRIDGE
    so, when his WELL swelled over
    he couldn't help it.:)
    his head was cloudy
    from the howdy doody
    that the haze brought.
    coz
    last night
    was just too much...STUFF.

    you know it.
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes...

    asked was he prepared...
    he quickly said...
    "yes...!"

    not fully understanding
    the question
    confusion to
    how...
    and why...
    he was
    choosen to
    receive...
    well...
    the map to the
    bridge...
    to a land he did not
    know how to
    explore...


    he was swallowed...
    and she...

    well, you know...
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ohhh My !

    Some bridges traverse troubled waters -
    seems as if the waters aren't the only things troubled.

    Daaang - I'm not mad at a sister for installin a toll booth
    but I KNOW ol' dude is goin through withdrawal.- lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooweeee!! Ms.D

    ya hit raw and hard
    and i love it !!!
    see that's what a woman does
    to a brutha as he get lost
    in the valley of yum land
    say it sis as u feel it....:heart: :kiss:
     
  9. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    magical writing...

    ...cause a brutha...
    would know...
    as i would know...
    that there would
    be no recollection
    of events happened...

    its just that good~

    thanks Hyp and $R
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ha!...i'm lovin' this piece. now, that's all i can say to that! keep on scribin', gurl.
     
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